--

What an adventure. Great travel diary. As a story nerd, I kept trying to figure out where you were, so maybe put the hyperlink early in the story :) Because I didn't have too much context of where you were exactly, the story also had a privileged perspective in its telling revealing more about you than the place you visited. So maybe this was your point?

--

--

Cappelli, MFA, JD, PhD
Cappelli, MFA, JD, PhD

Written by Cappelli, MFA, JD, PhD

Top Know Nothing Writer with way too many degrees who enjoys musing on life's absurdity.

Responses (1)